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Really tried to get into this but its hard when theres a black bar that covers a third of the screen and no way to remove it. Playing on android

Нет я не говорю удалить просто можно сделать Так что бы герой сам выбрал иметь с ней отношения или нет иначе даже когда выбираю ее игнорить все равно с ней отношения делают остальные модели красивые и хорошие

After you get home from the movies with Lily in Chapter 26, there's a line of dialogue meant to be coming from Lily but it shows it coming from Nina.

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What are the differences between Taboo and standard?

I don't want to have a relationship with Megan, but I still have to. It is possible in the new version to make sure that there is no relationship with Megan at all

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are you asking for someone to completely remove a character from a game just because you don't want it

Hi, I have a question why it is impossible to ignore Megan even when I refuse, a relationship is still being built with her

holy shit. i saved my game and stopped playing. I looked at the save file and was shocked to see 5 hours plus play time. i had a lot of fun so far. thank you for this nice novel.

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Sometimes the  mc's face just looks really off to me, its hard to describe. And a lot of the intimate scenes are a bit choppy which can be kinda distracting. But I do like the story and the game overall! Wish it had a gallery though, hopefully that's something you consider adding (Along with more polished dialogue)

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Hi. What do the "fixes" do? What version is this download? Standard or taboo?

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Got a bunch of silly errors because the code refers to sound files that don't exist.  Get your naming convention sorted.

Hello,

Cool game for the most part!  Some of the dialogue is wanting, yes, but I'm not a stickler on that too much.  


Hoping to see way more of Bella, as she's extremely hot!  If anyone knows what character model that is or if that model is used in another game please let me know.

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If you like being given two options a whole lot and don't mind both leading to the same thing, this game will still disappoint you. The tone is set early, when you're given the choice to perv on one of the women showering and if you pass, she still chastises you for perving on her.
The three women whom the MC lives with are the shallowest tropes-disguised-as-characters you'll see in a game not made in one of those 24 hour game jams. Actually, that isn't fair, most of those jam games have better character development in one or two chapters than anyone in this game at all, inc the MC. It's not even fap-worthy, dialogue skip material, the animations are lame and the models have all been seen, more or less, in far batter games.
The MC constantly chirps out the stupidest strings of nonsensical profanity when remotely surprised. Honestly, I could get it being an attempt at humor if the MC had any redeeming qualities, but he doesn't. He's a giant cock, literally and figuratively, that ejaculates gallons of either jizz or stupid, word salads full of expletives arranged in such a way that makes me think, "Damn, am I being too hard on this dev? Maybe he's a stroke survivor?"
I'd only recommend this game to someone you want to STOP playing these kinds of games coz they have already beat the skin off their knob and need a shockingly awful example of why people who say these games poison people's minds might actually be right.

Tried installing both versions on android tablet, it staged but won't install?

Ok just tried the ignore tap and it worked Doh!

I was really enjoying playing this until it crashed at the bowling alley part where mc says he has to go

ignore

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I had to stop playing because the drection the story was taking was so outlandishly unbelievable it ruined the experience... and I was only up to chapter 7. If it's this bad now who knows what else will happen.

This being said I fully understand and appreciate the efforts needed to put something like this together so this is not a critisism to the dev(s). I can also accept a bit of artistic license which may not always line up with the way the world works. But in my personal opinion there is a limit to what I am willing to accept.

And that is exactly what this is, a personal opinion. I urge the dev(s) to push on and finish their vision of what they want it to be, it's just not for me. 

I have chosen not to review in more detail as to avoid spoilers but would be happy to elaborate if anyone was interested.

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seriously if you reject a girl its game over that's kind of bs maybe i personally don't like her and don't want to do anything with her 

whens the next chapter releasing

Can you skip chapters? Because I've played the first 21 chapters and then got a new pc so I can't skip.

i wish this is my 3rd time redoing it 

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What the difference of taboo and standard?

Haven't tried Taboo but I can safely assume it would change the dialoge to show MC is related in some way to the ladies.

so taboo is incest, meanwhile the standard it just family friends knows each other 

Basically yes, assuming they have used "taboo" in the right context. As I said, I haven't tried it myself as I'm not into that. Based on what I have seen so far it could likely be an Aunt and cousins or something down those lines.

i check it out, yup there cousin

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No, every chapter always includes all previous chapters. So with chapter 22 you'll have everything from 1-22

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I really don't want to develop a relationship with her

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You can rule out a relationship with Megan, 

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Hi, please, the developer can not be forced to break up the relationship with Megan, she does not like it and you can add more plots to him from the same organization so that he starts fighting

very good writing, one of my favourites so far. 

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34506     "Mark eases himself onto the couch, wincing in pain as he does. Megan gently examines the cuts and bruises on his face."

34993     li "Oh fuck, Mark! You feel so good!"

35129     "Mark, Megan, Lily, and Nina stand in the doorway of their once cozy and orderly home, their expressions shifting from relief to shock as they take in the chaos that surrounds them."


Mark, instead of [name]

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This game is best summed up with the encounter with Falesha: You have to be a spineless slave and fucktoy to every bitch you meet, doesn't matter if she is a complete stranger you met five minutes ago, because if you refuse to help her, it is game over. Literally. The creator actually kills you/restarts the game if you don't immediately bow down to every bitch you meet and obey her every command.

The creator even has the nerve to berate you for refusing to help a pretty girl. What pretty girl? Falesha is barely a shadow in shadows, we haven't even been able to see her face or body, because she is a black woman, wearing black clothes on a black background, in a VERY dimly lit cafe, and she has been barely visible for six lines of text. We don't know the character at all, we haven't even been given a decent view of her features, but if you choose to refuse her, it is game over.

It doesn't matter which choices you make, the story and your relationships doesn't change a bit, you only potentially miss out on boring sex scenes. An example of this is in the very beginning, where you get the choice to peek on Lily in the shower or not. Doesn't matter if you choose not to do it, she still degrades MC for spying on her, and he apologizes as if he did it, when he didn't.

And the 'mystery' of his parents doesn't seem to matter to him at all. Otherwise, he would have demanded some answers from Megan. Instead, he trusts the one person who has shown herself able to commit computer crimes and privacy invasions against him, to help him solve the 'mystery'. The only character you have less reason to trust than Falesha, is the character you choose to trust with your supposedly most important part of life.

Once I got the Game Over for refusing to help Falesha, I stopped playing, because it was obvious the creator wanted to tell a story I wasn't interested in reading, not making a game.

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I downloaded Chapter 22 and got 2 threat warnings and quarantine actions from my anti-virus software.  

Never had any issues with previous downloads...

Maybe it shows that because the file ends with .exe, alot of apps that contain that ending are labelled virus

a lot of files that end with .exe are applications which are like 80% of what runs on a PC

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I will come back when this has finish btw please don't force me to pay for the full version

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It's has an okay plot and on okay flow of the story but I was hooked a little, that's why I made it until the end of the update. Now, what I don't like the most is the freaking overreacting, super exaggerating, stupid and shitty lines of the MC. I mean, it's an adult visual novel so there's a lot of foul words coming by but jesus, MC's lines are so overwhelmingly childish like...is the dev trying to be so funny? Or, perhaps, did the dev intend to make the MC childish, clown and brainless as much as possible? If it's true, then, god what a horrible combination..MC with a below average face and has a shitty, bland and infuriating humor. As I said earlier, the story is alright, have pride on that dev cause a lot of AVN devs can't do shit when it comes to storytelling.

hmm the only issue I had with this was the he he  at the end of some sentence where it didn't make sense

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Love this game but geeze, some of these ladies could raise the damn titanic with the life rafts on their chests. There's no small medium large... there's small medium and bazooka. 🤣

LOL...true.  On a different subject, any issues with ch22?  I get warning from my AV software when I unpack the zip file.

Hello, can you do a translation in French. THANKS.

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Same issue as Chestercat with the MC's name. That said, great update. Loved the, "Return of the Living Dead," reference!

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New version - chapter 22 - right after Nina saved the MC, the custom name doesn't show in narration while he sits for Megan to look at the cuts and bruises.

Also in the private jet 'Megan' answers "I'll be fine, Megan. It's just... everything that happened, it's hard to shake it off." after Megan asked the MC he is fine. I believe it's the main character who should answer that.

During Lily handjob scene she refers to the main character by the default name too at least once.

He also calls Lily 'NINA' once when shouting he is about to cum. Might be a slip up from the the character though given that he may be having an affair with both sisters. Or it may be a mistake made when writing the dialogues. Given that Lily doesn't react i'd say it's a mistake though. I know no girl who doesn't react when you shout their sister's name while having sex with them.


Also while the MC takes off his pants while he 'sleeps' with Nina he say "OH... MY... GOSH! YES!". I may be wrong, but maybe it's Nina saying that

Let's hope this get fixed asap

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"Chapter 22
What's New: 160 images, 6 animations"

wow, sounds like a very short update.
i dont care though, it sure beats waiting an entire year for an update like a lot of devs do .. keep up the good work :) 

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I love this game, the characters, the main plot, the bonds between MC and the three main girls. Really awesome and well written! 
Just one or two details frustrated me, first the lying of Megan about the parents only in description and not in the story, and second the lack of description of the documents found by MC and Nina
Could have been a really cool development in the games by me, and disappointing





!!!SPOILER!!!
Last BIG bad event is the capture of MC, going by the back of the hotel like never before and with Bella acting very strange, MC knowing Bella had shady intentions and drinks like a complete victim is totally not logical to me, the biggest disappointment in the story


Except that, one of my favorite VN,  thanks dev and hoping to see more very soon

try other games, this one is pretty bad

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